Thursday, January 27, 2022

A Rose from Emily: Emily’s POV

I set out into the town and ignored the curious looks. I had made up my mind. Of course, I had known what the people would say, “She’s going to kill herself,” or “Barron will be the one she marries,” but I did not care, for I was quite beyond that point. I kept my head high and looked straight ahead of myself. I had stopped caring many years ago, being the spectacle of the town. I was truly alone once they had taken my father’s body from me. This time they could not take it away from me, for I had found my perfect companion. He was the same build as my father with a similar complexion as well, he would do. I would get a good night of sleep tonight.

I entered the near-empty drugstore and found the druggist. “I want some poison,” I told him, yet I was met with a blank stare. “I want some poison,” I repeated.

“Yes, Miss Emily. What kind? For rats and such? I’d recom—”

“I want the best you have. I don’t care what kind,” I said, as I had begun to grow impatient. It was at this point I resolved that every person living in this town was incompetent. The man continued to dawdle nervously until I remembered the name. My father had mentioned it before. “Arsenic.”

Upon receiving my poison, I went straight to work. I had already set up his things, I was sure he would appreciate it. I prepared a nice meal, such as a proper woman does. This was going to be my companion’s last meal, it had to be splendid. After cooking for many hours, it was ready. Pot roast with a side of mashed potatoes, topped with arsenic-gravy. I invited my Barron over for dinner and served him the well-prepared meal. He loved the mashed potatoes. He was dead before dessert. I ate my pudding quietly, then got up to prepare for bedtime.

I dragged the man up the stairs as best I could, holding his head so as not to bump it on the steps. Once I got him into the room, I retrieved my father’s old nightclothes. The ones he wore every night. Before they took him away from me. I gently dressed the body in these clothes and lay him to rest on the bed. I tucked him into bed making sure not to disturb my man and got ready for bed.

“The arsenic man was insufferable,” I told him as I changed into my nightclothes, “It seems this entire town wishes to see me alone.” I had a companion once again, no longer the old maid of the town. I had done for myself what no one else ever would. I washed my face, sighing in contentment. I shut the lights and climbed into bed with my lover. 

“I love you,” I said, burying my face in his chest. We embraced, and I fell asleep with him stroking my hair.

4 comments:

  1. Your alternate ending was really interesting to read, especially since as readers we only get to know what the town thinks about Emily, and we never hear a record of what happens from Emily herself. You did a nice job capturing Emily’s personality with her annoyance when buying the poison and it was a really fun blog to read. Great post!

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  2. Great post! I liked how you juxtaposed a lot of commonplace things with horrifying things (e.g. "He loved the mashed potatoes. He was dead before dessert"). I thought the way you depicted Emily as almost bored and completely undisturbed by her actions was really interesting. Your reimagining had all the hallmarks of the gothic style of fear/suspense. It was subtle and ominous and very fun to read. Great job!

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  3. I really enjoyed your darker, morbid take on Emily's perspective. The last line with the detail of stroking her hair particularly interests me because it shows just how possibly delusional Emily was at that point - tired of dealing with the town and everyone and tucked away in her own reality. The comparison between Barron and the father was a nice little detail as well, providing well thought-out reasoning for her chosen victim. So fun to read!

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  4. I liked how you pitch Emily's thoughts as both crazy but also very calm. I think it's a fitting description of her character because she is very clearly disturbed, but doesn't seem to express too much physical emotion at the same time (and instead thinks it). Nice post!

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